Dark Knight Joker Monologue

This is my sixteenth monologue and my first monologue taken from a film. Obviously, most of the people have people seen The Dark Knight, so I'll spare any kind of lengthy synopsis. The monologue I chose was for the character of the Joker and was his first "how I got these scars" explanation (when he kills Gambol).

Now that's it for the monologue itself. In conclusion, I wish to say I am open to any and all constructive criticism and comments. I am an amateur actor, still in high school, and I am performing these monologues for my own amusement and to display my acting ability while improving it through your suggestions. I would love to hear how I can become a better actor! But I am also human, and any compliments you can muster would make my day. I hope you enjoy the performance.